car designer well..
as the last guy said, take pride in your work..try and make things look better..
some of the parts were out of the screen..i was only able to drag 2 things..unless thats all you put there..
the sound was good, but fix up the detail and the other little problems...what about a preloader??
you sound..is it an mp3? if it is try and rip it into a wav..the wav will make the fla get bigger but it should make your .swf smaller..wav compresses better in flash..
